WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
At Whirinaki Creek.
On Saturday I stayed home and played with my cousin. First we played tag. I said, “I'll be in.” He said, “Okay.”
I chased him around the house and tagged him.
Then he chased me around the house. I was getting tired so I needed a break for 2 minutes. My cousin also needed a break.
After that my mum said, ¨We're going for a swim at Whirinaki creek.¨ I said, ¨Yay I am as hot as the sun.¨ I went to get some clothes for me and my cousin. My mum said, ¨We're going now.¨ So we went to the car. We arrived at the creek. I had already changed so I just jumped in the creek straight away. My cousin was getting changed. When I got in it was freezing. I hopped out until it warmed up. Me and my cousin jumped in. It was a little bit warmer. I challenged my cousin to a game of who can hold your breath the longest underwater. I timed it with my waterproof watch. I was getting ready to start the time I came up at 10 and he came up at 9. We were ready to go now. I had a great time with my cousin.
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