Recount Writing-On Saturday

WALT use the correct structure and language in our writing. 
On Saturday.
On Saturday I went fishing with my family at the beach in Waitangi. First we got ready and got the fishing rods and bait ready. Then we went off and my papa and nana were buying us some lollies and pie. It was so yummy. When we got to the beach at Waitangi we put the bait onto the line. Then we cast our fishing lines into the water. We were waiting a long time for the fish to bite. I finally felt a bite. I pulled and reeled at the same time. I was excited. On my hook was a big snapper. The colour of it was brown and white. I thought it was a cool colour. My nana and papa and Amaziah liked the colour too. Then my brother got a bite. He reeled the line in. On my brothers line was a kingfish. The colour of the kingfish was grey and silver. My brother was jumping up and down. He felt excited and happy.
 We went back home. We put our fish in the pan and cooked it. 
We were waiting and waiting for our fish to cook. 
Finally it was cooked. We had our fish for dinner. It was so yummy then we put salt on it. I felt happy because we went fishing and I caught a fish.