I am learning to make my writing more interesting for my readers.
This is the published copy of my writing
This is the published copy of my writing
On Sunday morning I went to the skate park
with my brother and my mum.
First, we went on our scooters.
I said to my brother, “Let’s go on the park.”
with my brother and my mum.
First, we went on our scooters.
I said to my brother, “Let’s go on the park.”
Next, we went on the swings.
I felt happy because I went to the skate park
with my brother and my mum.
I felt happy because I went to the skate park
with my brother and my mum.
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